I thought last week was difficult enough with falling behind with my studies, but this week has been even worse! We have been thrown task after task after task!! Below is one such task. It was to envisage a character through dialogue. I quite enjoyed writing it. It just seemed to flow. Hope you enjoy it too? And as always any feedback is most welcome!
She walked over to him, unsure whether he had seen her or not. āWould you like a second cup Sir?ā She noticed him start. He looked up into her eyes and to Olivia it looked like he had been found guilty. Guilty of sitting in a coffee shop alone. Guilty of a pupil seeing him outside of school. Guilty of being found reading āWide Sargasso Seaā. āMy favourite book!ā
āWell I thought I would give it a try since one of my star pupils loves it so much!ā He blushed or she thought she noticed the colour rise to his cheeks.
āWould you like me to get you another cup?ā He shook his head.
āI donāt think Iāll be staying much longer.ā He looked at his watch.
āAre you waiting for someone Sir?ā He smiled his assent.
āThough I donāt think sheās coming.ā
āMaybe sheās been held up?ā
āMaybe,ā he sighed. āThough somehow I think I’ve been blown off.ā
āNo Sir, surely not.ā
āWell I have been waiting here for over an hour.ā
āThereāll be a plausible explanation I’m sure.ā
āPlease donāt tell your class mates I was stood up. I really donāt want them knowing that I am a sad lonely old teacher.ā
āYouāre not old!ā Olivia caught herself.
āOlder than you!ā
āNot by much.ā
āBy enough.ā
āIād date you!ā Olivia not only surprised herself but her teacher sat upright too.
āWould you now,ā he released a strained laugh, showing he was trying too hard to make light of the matter. āAnyway,ā he changed the subject like a click of the fingers. āWhat are you doing here?ā
āI work here.ā
āI can see that, but why, you have your studies?ā
āI need the money Sir.ā
āCall me Adam. Sir is so stiff and formal.ā Now it was Oliviaās time to blush. She lowered her gaze. āWhy do you need the money?ā
āI’m saving to go to Paris,ā she blurted.ā I’ve wanted to go since I can remember!ā
āParis is a lovely city!ā
āHave you been?ā Olivia couldn’t stop the rising excitement within her. Adam nodded. She desired more than anything else to be able to share her dreams with someone. Adam, her teacher seemed the most qualified than anyone she knew, to be the one she shared them with. She sat down at the table before him. āWhatās it like?ā
āOlivia!ā a shrill cry broke Adamās description of music filled streets, the Seine glistening in the moonlight and Art, not just in the galleries but on the buildings that lined the boulevards. Olivia arose from her seat under the glare of her boss.
āSorry I have cups to wash.ā
āPerhaps,ā Olivia looked down at Adam with wide eyes. āWe can continue this conversation at school, Monday.ā
‘Yes, maybe.ā She walked away, forgetting Adamās empty coffee cup on the table.
Ā© Christine Lucas 2014.